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Rdz9
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0 posted 2003-03-17 11:42 PM


You are the one that heaven has lost
your eyes like diamonds, beautiful frost

your hair as white as pure snow fallen
as i gaze at you i wonder if i should be crawling

to kiss your feet and hold you tight
although others look on you with fright

to see such unearthly beauty is rare
but even more unbelieveable is the way that you care

for everything for everyone
no matter who they are or what they've done

you see their soul like no one cares to
you look to their eyes and see their soul to
no matter what they try to do

you never judge them, but sometimes you cry
when you do i want to die
to watch you stare through every lie
then watch you bite your lip and cry

i wonder what youve seen and then i know
youve seen a hateful soul

to see that you can care for all who are lost
i know you must be, the angel heaven lost.

© Copyright 2003 Rob - All Rights Reserved
Silver_Tryst
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1 posted 2003-03-17 11:46 PM


nice write Rdz, sad to think that many people are so forgiving and look past everything and often do get hurt, but i love the poem.

Shayne

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2 posted 2003-03-18 03:53 AM


nice
Justbleu
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3 posted 2003-03-20 08:03 AM


Wonderful write....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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4 posted 2003-03-20 08:12 AM


From reading your loving words, it appears that you may be another angel that Heaven had lost...

Peace & Light,
Earth Angel

Rdz9
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5 posted 2003-04-09 06:34 PM


Bah. I cant believe i misspelled "heaven".
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