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Rdz9
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since 2003-03-16
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MT, USA

0 posted 2003-03-19 11:20 PM


Standing on this mountain high,
arms spread wide unto the sky
the montana wind on the fly
rushing past us, blowing by
We stand straight and tall
neither of us afraid to fall
In our hearts we trust eachother
both our lives for the other
to you id give my soul to hold
to shield you from a world gone cold
but on this mountain, wild and free
the world is forgotten, its only you and me.



© Copyright 2003 Rob - All Rights Reserved
Silver_Tryst
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since 2003-03-10
Posts 64
MT
1 posted 2003-03-19 11:32 PM


Great Write, i loved the feel of presence the wind, in could feel it blowing on me, Love it

Shayne

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 2003-03-20 07:56 AM


This one reminds me of a mountaintop back home in Alaska.....Very nice!!!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2003-03-20 08:41 AM


I could actually feel the "Montana Wind"--thanks for the breath of fresh!

Peace & Light,
Earth Angel

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
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4 posted 2003-03-20 08:49 AM


to you id give my soul to hold
to shield you from a world gone cold
but on this mountain, wild and free
the world is forgotten, its only you and me.
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love these lines....  : )

~~ Connie ~~

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-03-20 08:52 AM


Rdz9, I'm liking these poems of yours.
Sounds like you are very much in love.
I know the feeling...

Hugs,
Ethel....garysgirl

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