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Montana Wind
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Montana Wind |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
Standing on this mountain high, arms spread wide unto the sky the montana wind on the fly rushing past us, blowing by We stand straight and tall neither of us afraid to fall In our hearts we trust eachother both our lives for the other to you id give my soul to hold to shield you from a world gone cold but on this mountain, wild and free the world is forgotten, its only you and me. |
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Silver_Tryst Member
since 2003-03-10
Posts 64MT |
Great Write, i loved the feel of presence the wind, in could feel it blowing on me, Love it Shayne |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This one reminds me of a mountaintop back home in Alaska.....Very nice!!!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I could actually feel the "Montana Wind"--thanks for the breath of fresh! Peace & Light, Earth Angel |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
to you id give my soul to hold to shield you from a world gone cold but on this mountain, wild and free the world is forgotten, its only you and me. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ love these lines.... : ) ~~ Connie ~~ |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Rdz9, I'm liking these poems of yours. Sounds like you are very much in love. I know the feeling...  Hugs, Ethel....garysgirl |
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