Open Poetry #25 |
Travellin' Soldier |
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
A young man Just before he was snet overseas To fight in the war Found his mate to be Everynight he prayed That he would come Back alive To his one and only The night before he left He married His beloved And as he boarded the plane He looked back And saw his wife in tears But she was still Strong enough to salute him Before he entered the plane He sent her postcards And letters Whenever he could But they were few and far between One day his wife Stopped getting letters And she knew He wasn't going To be coming Home ever again One day a knock came On her door She opened it To two army officers And she knew The news She was fixin' to get When she heard He was dead She broke down And sobbed Like her heart was just ripped out But she will never Stop loving Her travellin' soldier Even though He is dead Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
That definitely describes our love Julie. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Such a sad write that happens too often during these troubled times. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
realities of events like this make it just so devistating... full of love's passion, but pain. If this didn't actually happen it would be much easier to read. well done Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Julie, this is very touching, sweet friend, this has the Dixie Chicks spirit behind it, I just love that song and I love this poem too, yay, my prayers are with these soldiers and their families, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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lost_star Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 114NY, U.S.A |
This is a wonderful poem. Its just a shame that the world still has so much hate for this to happen. Great work! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Julie, this is a very beautiful, though sad, poem. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Painful to envision--but very well-written! You are growing in leaps and bounds as a writer, Dear Julie! Peace & Light, EA |
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