Open Poetry #25 |
She Laughs |
icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Triumphant she stands a banner in hand that reads "Halfway Home" Midway from pink heading for purple she waves from the top of Red Hot never better than now Regrets are flung behind landing dead center on a burning bridge Hands raised to heavens she shouts out loud Burn Baby, Burn! Her pockets are empty, she's starting out new free from the demons of yesterday Walking forward, crowds part to let her pass... She throws back her head and she laughs the only man worth your tears will never make you cry |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Nice read, I laugh at my new starts everyday! Jason |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Walking forward, crowds part to let her pass... She throws back her head and she laughs Yep, it works for me |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Sounds like someone is working towards a new beginning. Go for it! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sounds like she's feeling really good about her forward journey...... "Love makes the world go around" |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Jason - thanks Most days ya just gotta laugh! White Rose - appreciate the read and glad its workin' for ya! bklyn - yeahhhh just enjoying my 40's... Top of the Rock, they say! Thanks for the read and welcome to Passions Ethel... thanks Some days are diamonds! [This message has been edited by icequeen (03-19-2003 09:43 PM).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Especially like the characterization of the last line! Core |
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