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Tim
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since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2003-02-17 04:11 PM

High up in the mountains,
...near the great divide,
Lays an alpine meadow,
...where heaven and earth collide,
Mountainsides of pristine glory,
...frame the verdant lea,
Above the clouds where eagles soar,
...and quakes the aspen tree.
Beneath the snowcapped mountain peaks,
...untouched by human hand,
Where marmots play amid the rocks,
...lays hallowed meadowed land.
The mountains thrust their jagged peaks,
...tear holes into the sky,
Letting loose upon the meadow,
...glories from on high.
An altar to the gods above,
...green grass and columbine,
Spread across the meadow’s floor,
...in splendored hues divine.
High up in the mountains,
...near the great divide,
Lays an alpine meadow,
...where gods themselves reside.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-17 04:19 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

2 posted 2003-02-17 04:26 PM

Wow... amazing! I love the scenery!! Thank you for such a lovely painting of a poem.

Love,
Moca

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2003-02-17 06:14 PM

I've seen such places... both on fire with bloom and flame..

you capture it nicely

carol
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since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

4 posted 2003-02-17 06:15 PM

Tim, this is so nice

always treat others the way you want to be treated
Love from Rita

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 2003-02-17 08:10 PM

Very beautiful, Tim! This brought to mind your God's Windowsill poem from ages ago! Another beauty!

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

6 posted 2003-02-17 08:23 PM

I enjoyed every line. Imagery great!

Quite beautiful.

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

7 posted 2003-02-17 10:54 PM

This painted an awesome picture in my head, had a wonderful rythm and This ONE PART

The mountains thrust their jagged peaks,
...tear holes into the sky,
Letting loose upon the meadow,
...glories from on high.

BEAUTIFUL HEARTFELT WORDS

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2003-02-17 10:56 PM

Beautiful imagery...very nicely penned.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

9 posted 2003-02-17 11:30 PM

You paint words in dreamtime....

you KNEW I'd love this!

missed ya much...(my fault I know)

but ya just played my song...thank you.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

10 posted 2003-02-17 11:58 PM

Tim...such a beauitful place...I saw it too thanks to you.

CD
Member

since 2001-01-27

Posts 101

11 posted 2003-02-18 12:10 PM

Exquisite detail - I truly love this piece!

CD

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

12 posted 2003-02-18 06:52 AM

...green grass and columbine,
Spread across the meadow’s floor,
...in splendored hues divine.
High up in the mountains,
...near the great divide,
Lays an alpine meadow,

~*~

where eidelweiss grows...
So now you can imagine just what
lovely tunes will be in my mind
for the rest of the morning...

and thank you Tim, for your vote
of confidence.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

13 posted 2003-02-18 08:17 AM

Indeed they do.. It's a glorious place up on that meadow... There's a whole new vantage point to the world about us. You paint a lovely visage, m'friend...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

14 posted 2003-02-18 08:23 AM

Tim,
Now this is a write to my liking, enjoyed.

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

15 posted 2003-02-18 08:27 AM

Thank you all for your gracious replies. I appreciate the fact you took the time to read and am glad you enjoyed.

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

16 posted 2003-02-19 10:54 AM

This is absolutely beautiful, Tim... I enjoyed very much! *S*

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