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Waiting For Return
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Waiting For Return |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Waiting For Return lulled by layers of winter’s lace pulled tightly to cover edges patience becomes anticipation frozen a thing suspended remaining in halt and just as I have waited through winter I now linger in expectations of occurrences to be crowned in daffodils |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Very nicely written... the images of spring and teh passing of winter things I think many if not most of us are looking forward to. I enjoyed |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Helen, a very beautiful and hopeful wish for springtime.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Waiting for someone special is a wait worth while. But is not fun to do for any length of time. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady Yes, something to think about, enjoyed. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nice images |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Yes, very nicely done.My vote. Jason |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
this one warms the heart with it's sense of anticipation! Enjoyed it! david |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
me too Helen - me too - always nice - singing words - silky - xxoo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very lovely .... "...to be crowned in daffodils". Margherita |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Helen....  of course you get my vote. really loving your stuff laydeeee. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I now linger in expectations of occurrences to be crowned in daffodils This is lovely Helen. It gets my vote.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely writing, you always do |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Have I ever mentioned how much i love your words..if not..all apologies |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
patience becomes anticipation frozen a thing suspended remaining in halt What an incredible description! *S* I like this very much, lady!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very beautiful Helen... Get my vote! ~Hugs~ |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'm with you on the daffodils...  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay!!! Oh Helen, I love the springtime so much and the daffodils are one of my favorite folowers of all! (kiss on cheek) May the bluebird of ahppiness be on your shoulde rall this spring, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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DonFurr Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 172Monticello IN |
Yeah! Excellent Dear Lady |
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waldopepper Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 157Tennessee, USA |
"I have waited through winter I now linger in expectations of occurrences to be crowned in daffodils" Yes, that is what I am ready for. Springtime is such an extraordinary place to be caught up in. Wonderful words my friend. Like a breath of fresh air. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Daffodils are my favorite flower. When I lived in Michigan, they were often the first flowers to bloom in the spring and it was always a welcome sight.  Good job! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Helen - lovely!! My vote is cast! Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - as you do... BC |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
You give spring a new step, here. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Nice write and wanted to vote for this one Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Helen, this is just beautiful. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Helen, How I miss those acres of daffodils! What a fabulous write. I love it. Here's my vote. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Spring is blossoming where I am right now, and it is so beautiful. Your poem brings to light this wonderful occurance. Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent. [This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (04-03-2003 12:16 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very very nice, Helen M |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
1slick_lady, this is very nice, Thank You for sharing. |
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