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0 posted 2003-03-18 04:06 PM


My 23rd Thank You

A birthday gathering to remember
Because I saw their smiling faces
Captured in a photographic memory.
Friends from different walks of life,
A present that couldn’t have been more fulfilling.
All my lovingness offered in just one night
For the people I have counted on to help me get by.
We gathered to celebrate more than four friend’s birthdays,
But to celebrate friendships of one lifetime.
Uncertain of what will still be memory,
I write with these photos in front of me.
At least if my age fails to remember
I still have these photos and writings
To remind me of you guys.
Thank You…

Please check out my poetry online
http://mysite.de/mrlawrencesmalls

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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-03-18 05:11 PM


nicely done!
INclan
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2 posted 2003-03-18 06:29 PM


nicely done. I too save treasures from along the road of life....
WhiteRose
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3 posted 2003-03-18 06:31 PM


Very nicely done.  Enjoyed this read
garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-03-18 06:35 PM


I love this and know that your
friends in the photo will, too.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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