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The Mood Of Shiva
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The Mood Of Shiva |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
The sea has many changes. It is the mood of Shiva...the dance of his breath - the rise and fall of worlds before his touch. It is the mystery known...and of that which remains unknowable. Stripped to the bareness of our intimacies - We stand naked before this sea...yearning always towards the farthest shore. And seek to cloak ourselves in prayers of safe passage. The sea has many changes. Yet there is stillness in its depths. We offer ourselves to that which stands changeless - And face the sea together...as the water parts before our touch. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Though there may be ripples on the surface, life is peaceful and still within. Beautiful... thought-provoking... illuminating the way for soul searching, finding that sweet inner peace- something we all desperately need about now. Thank you... Love, Moca |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Very deep, very philosophical and calming. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Images of peacefulness, tranquility. Nicely done! Namaste, poet friend. safely checked into my library |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) And the ticket to ride is to dive for pearls deep in the stillness of the waters, for only when we embrace the calm waters will we ever achieve justice! (sigh) This is absolutely wonderful, sweet friend, you have my peaceful vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
stillness it its depth, yes, and depth in its stillness, do you see what i see? |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Stripped to the bareness of our intimacies - We stand naked before this sea...yearning always towards the farthest shore. Nicely done, enjoyed the read. |
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Etain Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 92The moon... |
A deep breath and a gentle smile. Beautiful... Love, Etain. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, this has a peaceful and calming feel. Good choice for book submission, friend.....  Hugs, Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very wise choice for the book Eric! ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I liked this!  Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You masterfully create this place where stillness and oneness with the Divine breath make us strong, filled with peace, trust and hope. May I hold your hand while we face the sea together? Love, Margherita |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
peaceful waters...nice ~A~ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ericc - this is just beautiful - ohhh Margherita - what a lovely reply . . . I loved this! Touched me deep just when I needed it - thank you xxoo |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
There is so much depth in the sea, and I feel I felt the same depth through this poem, great writing.  Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
I love this...mystical... it's creative and it's got my vote |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
beautifully written. It's easy to see why it was chosen for publishing. Congrats! Sunkissed. |
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