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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2003-03-18 02:06 PM


Sharp angles soften at her touch, harsh colors start to fade.
The glaring lights, the blaring sounds, the balance I will trade.
She blankets me against the cold, that permeates within,
envelopes me into her fold, "Tranquility" begins.

She knows though pressing problems weigh, with her, I am immune.
Her calm caress, her soothing words, will dissapate them soon.
As storms on the horizon dissappear into the sea,
such is the healing power of my muse, "Tranquility".

A minute or an hour in her company I lust.
Between us there is nothing but the element of trust.
If I could do for her as much, as she has done, we'd see,
these words would give her substance to exist outside of me.

© Copyright 2003 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
Pilgrimage
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1 posted 2003-03-18 02:55 PM


Mmm, tranquility. Serenity. Peace. Lovely things. Sometimes when I walk around the park I see them.

I like your poem.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Midnitesun
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2 posted 2003-03-18 04:08 PM


by any name, she is magnificent, and hopefully always as generous as she has been to you thus far
j0n4th4n
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3 posted 2003-03-18 04:29 PM


hhmm very opposite to my usual feelings, but very effective at comunicating tranquility!
Dr.Moose1
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4 posted 2003-03-18 05:30 PM


Pilgrimage,
Thanks. Parks are nice places at times, at others there's still too much activity.
Doc
Midnitesun,
Thank you. This was the name she gave me( I think she has many others, or there are many others like her).
Doc
jOn4th4n,
Thanks. Agreed, and that is why I was so pleased to make her acquiantance.
Doc

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