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Let Me Introduce You (ICE QUEEN)
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Let Me Introduce You (ICE QUEEN) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I'm a big girl now, so go right ahead and mess with me, but I'm giving you fair warning, you better let the others be. If you want to play, we will begin to indulge in this game, but first let me introduce myself by another name. You haven't met her yet because I've kept her locked inside but it's time for her to join in and go along for the ride. You need taught a little lesson, yes babe I know it's true I believe that what you need is a gigantic dose of "YOU." I'll teach you a lesson on the things that you've been dishing out, but I will do it more subtely, I have no need to scream and shout. So please say hello to the other side of me, I call her the "Ice Queen" Baby you best get ready, cuz the likes of her you have never seen! I can gaurantee that you won't forget this chicks name and that when she's through with you; You will NEVER be the same! I'm just going to sit back and let my friend, the ice queen rule.... and baby I will watch as this icey lady makes you DROOL! I must have had my momma's will and Gods Amazing Grace... I'm a survivor.... (Reba) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (03-18-2003 10:35 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL...so, you've got one acting all smart-alecky, hey? Oh, I so remember when I had to put someone "in their place"...such a lesson... Let me know how it turns out!  [This message has been edited by Sunshine (03-18-2003 10:47 AM).] |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Donna, you go Girl!!!!  Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh yes Kari, a big one to. I might be a gentle spirit....but watch out when I finally get mad!! *wink* [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (03-18-2003 11:06 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
lol....thanks Ethel. Someone needs a dose of their own medicine and I have decided its time to teach a lesson.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit A clever write, enjoyed. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hmmm...Gentle Spirit/Ice Queen ... go get 'em girl. Enjoyed this and may I borrow Ms. Ice Queen from time to time? Hugs, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Donna, Love the ferocity of spirit here. Reminds how I feel about my children, parents, those I love the most, though they ~might be wrong~ every time, my loyalty blinds me and I'd come just this side of killing, if not physically, then, definitely verbally, those who hurt them. Subtle or blatant, I play God, but, eventually when the deliberate hurting continues I wash my hands of warnings and drop back and let God do the avenging, so much more powerful than any mere little rant and rage from me. Those I am standing up for? Better get their act together...whether my children, parent or my friends...to see what part they might have played to cause the uproar to begin with or why they themselves don't stand up and speak. If this is real much luck to you in your avenging! Sometimes it works. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sey, hugs and thanks heading towards you. Marti, you may borrow her, but she really doesn't show up very often! Pat, it is most definately not about revenge, I am not a vengeful person at all. Sometimes though, some people need to be have a "gentle" dose of their own medicine before they can realize just how un-cool they are being!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!!! Donna..... YOU ROCK GIRL!! ~Luv and hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I loved it! The little girl within me is always coming out to play---but she is just not up to snuff when it comes time to battle with the big boys! I know there must be an Ice Maiden in there somewhere! Where is she when I need her?!? I suppose I must learn how to get in touch with the Ice Maiden within! Warm, springtime hugs, Linda |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
loved the energy behind this write and ehhhh, i sure hope i never meet this icequeen of yours  lotsa hugs, kelly |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles in delight) Freeze....right there, bow on your knees and worship me for I assure you mine are frozen tough and won't back down! (giggles) Oh my gosh, I just love your playful side, sweet friend, I think we all need to have others learn lessons sometimes, yay, you go girl, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
ya cant touch this....LOL   ME~ I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
LOL... OK lady... or is it ladies... eve? is that you.?.?.? LOL... let er rip.... lets see what the darker side does bring let us hear you, the siren sing coddle not the hearts of fools go ahead girl.... make them drool |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
WOWIE Aunt Donna I truely loved this one..it reminds me of me..lol nah, this was awesome, great job! If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Well now, is this "girl power" to the nth degree? I love it  |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Donna~ CHILL girl. I like the old you much more. LOL...Go get em Tiger!!! Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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