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Love Or Lust
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Love Or Lust |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
He looks at me from across the room his eyes starring so lovingly Then i feel the touch of his soft hand holding my hand The touch of his fingers on me feels so soft Its the kind of touch that makes your body tremble under the touch Your eyes meets each others in a very tender look You want to fight against these feelings that is taking over your body Then you realize there is no way you can fight it so you let your body give in to all of the passionate feelings Then the next day you are not sure if it was love or lust All you know is how right it felt always treat others the way you want to be treated Love from Rita [This message has been edited by carol (02-17-2003 03:00 PM).] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
It always feels good....but, both can be expensive..either can cost ya alot of money....but love?...It can cost you your heart on top of the bill....nice write... |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
yes I agree very nice write |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Ha..ha..I can figure it out the next day...even sooner...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Carol - now this is, well I'm not sure, love or lust??? BC |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very nice write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Toerag,yes i can relate to that it can either way always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Brad Majors, thanks for the comments always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
James, i figured it out also i was taking about my husband of 12 years always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Bill Charles, thanks for the comments always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
the_loner_23,glad you liked it always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very lyrical. Eric |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey, friend.....  . . He does you just like his son does me, doesn't he?....HeeHee!!!!! . . By the way, as you already know, Gary and I decided ours is love, too....it's lasted over 4 years already, hasn't it?  . We love ya'll.  Ethel and Gary |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Eric, Thanks a lot always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Ethel, i know you have guess it didnt take you as long as it did me always treat others the way you want to be treated Love from Rita [This message has been edited by carol (02-17-2003 10:37 PM).] |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
I loved this piece. Wonderful read. Something we all can relate to! |
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