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Open Poetry #25

I'm bored

GavinKidd
Junior Member

since 2003-02-14

Posts 44
NH

0 posted 2003-02-17 02:28 AM

I'm bored
He won't talk to me
He hides in his books and papers
The way his parents taught him
I talk with my mother
Idle chit-chat because he's around
No privacy for personals
I'm bored
A game of chess
A load of laundry
A browned leaf hangs from a lonely bough
Waving "Hello" and "Goodbye" as it let's free
flutter, butterfly twirl
I'm bored
He won't talk to me
He burrows his head in the story
Not living in the moment
There is no 20 minutes of our laughter together
No time for inconveniences
I'm bored
A bite to eat
A relaxing nap
The sun breaks through its cloudy advisaries,
Beaming happily, warming the skin
Kiss, soft lipped
I'm bored
Spontaneous Spontaniety
me me me me
That's what I need
you you you you
That's what I'm all about
hold my hand
Let's go for a ride
Live in my moment
We can't be bored anymore

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-02-17 03:20 AM

nice thoughts! loved the ending

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

2 posted 2003-02-17 10:07 PM

quite cool, especially this new take on "carpe diem." show the pole!

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

3 posted 2003-02-17 10:37 PM

If this isn't a daily activity for most couples I don't know what is..I loved how you expressed it and YES, the ending was Awesome...Do they still use that word? Awesome? hehehehe Beautiful work!!

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