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Goldboat
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since 2003-02-17

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0 posted 2003-02-17 02:42 PM

How Could I forget

How could I forget
the first date--you and me
when snow reflected the sunlight
and I fell into the Love Sea

How could I forget
the first kiss--you and me
whilst you gave me your heart
and the heart's key

How could I forget
the first March--you and me
your beautiful rosebud bloomed
and I was the happy bee

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-02-17 02:43 PM

Welcome to Passions! I do believe you're going to like it here. Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-02-17 02:45 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is such a lovely and gorgeous debut, sweet friend, I love it! May you always cherish these special memories of love and hold them deep to your heart! Welcome to Passions, sweet You, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet You, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-17-2003 02:46 PM).]

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

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Georgia

3 posted 2003-02-17 03:27 PM

I really enjoyed this! Welcome to passions!

LoveBug

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4 posted 2003-02-17 04:09 PM

Welcome to Passions! This is a wonderful first post... the progression of love is a wonderful thing, and you captured it well. Thanks for posting!

Peace I leave with you, My peace I give unto you: not as the world giveth, give I unto you.--Jesus Christ

Goldboat
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since 2003-02-17

Posts 66

5 posted 2003-02-17 04:15 PM

Thank you all for your replies. I really like this forum. I'm a Chinese poet, and it's not very easy for me to write poetry in English. I'm only trying it. Hope everyone will help me. I also like translating English poems into Chinese. If anyone would like me to translate their poems, please email me at [email protected]. Thank you again.

cinnamongirl
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since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

6 posted 2003-02-17 04:25 PM

Ohhhh... how sweet, light, lovely!! Thank you so much for sharing this charming poem!

Thank you!!

Love,
Moca

Shlee
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since 2003-02-16

Posts 72
USA

7 posted 2003-02-17 04:41 PM

Very nice. I like how it seems to display a gradual progression of the relationship even though the poem itself is short. I hope to see more of your work. Welcome from one new member to another

D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08

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Austin, Tx

8 posted 2003-02-17 04:45 PM

Great intro and a beautiful piece of verse.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

9 posted 2003-02-17 04:46 PM

Goldboat, we have several poets from all over the world who share one thing in common; they are bi- or even tri-lingual [or more!] I am sure you will find a great resource in Passions as a willing poetic harbor where we darn near stand in line to help others.

First off, you may want to sign up for Poetry Workshop [see Nan] and then perhaps review our English Workshop.

Once again, I'm looking forward to reading your poetry!

Waterbirdfly
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since 2003-02-16

Posts 32
China

10 posted 2003-02-17 11:54 PM

Hi! Jinzhou brother,I am Ë®Äñ·ÉÏè.It is a very good website,is it?

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

11 posted 2003-02-18 03:50 AM

love it!

Goldboat
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since 2003-02-17

Posts 66

12 posted 2003-02-18 03:17 PM

Thank you all!

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

13 posted 2003-02-24 12:04 PM

Jinzhou ge ni hao!

a belated welcome to passions and i enjoyed the read, especially your last paragraph..i'm a Singaporean Chinese and was trying to resist myself from writing this reply in huanyu pinyin..

Goldboat
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since 2003-02-17

Posts 66

14 posted 2003-02-24 12:17 PM

Hi, nice meet you here. My email address is:
[email protected]. And, welcome to our Exile-land International forum at: http://www.liufangdi.com/.

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

15 posted 2003-02-24 12:18 PM

I really enjoyed this first post, and look
forward to reading more of your work. I really
think that you'll like it here. I hope so.
Oh, and

WELCOME TO PASSIONS

Hugs,
Ethel.....garysgirl

passing shadows
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displaced

16 posted 2003-02-24 12:34 PM

Chanson
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

17 posted 2003-02-24 02:41 PM

There are some things we
should never forget.
Nice. *s

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

18 posted 2003-02-24 05:58 PM

beautiful!

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

19 posted 2003-02-24 09:01 PM

This is sooo wonderful....

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!
Nice to meet you!!!

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

CMGrimm
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since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

20 posted 2003-02-24 09:05 PM

Welcome to Passions. Great post.

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

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On A Journey To The Unknown

21 posted 2003-02-24 09:34 PM

Welcome to passions. This is a lovely first post.

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

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British Columbia, Canada

22 posted 2003-02-25 01:27 AM

This was a wonderful first post as well as an excellent entry for the book.

~* Carpe' Diem *~

Goldboat
Member

since 2003-02-17

Posts 66

23 posted 2003-02-25 11:20 AM

Thank you all so much! I really like here. And, I would like to see your poems at the Exile-land International forum. That is an English forum. You can find "enter" when you open the site: http://www.liufangdi.com/.

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

24 posted 2003-03-30 05:24 PM

Was it first love or first chance? On ly the young growing older can discern that. This poem certainly brings back memories.

Ringo

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since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

25 posted 2003-03-30 05:52 PM

Welcome to Passions. This poem was very good. I am looking forward to reading more ofr writing you.

Imagine all the People living life in peace...
John Lennon

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

26 posted 2003-03-30 05:53 PM

Yes, never forget...Love this and voting for this. James

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

27 posted 2003-03-30 09:50 PM

Goldboat - very nice upbeat writing with romance for the book...

BC

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

28 posted 2003-03-30 09:54 PM

Wonderful first post and a great book submission!
Welcome!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Goldboat
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since 2003-02-17

Posts 66

29 posted 2003-03-31 12:16 PM

Was it first love or first chance?

Right. Thanks!

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