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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-03-17 08:08 AM

Slouched against
the couch
she clutches
her belly and
pushes it tightly
together at her
belly button
Look a bagel
she says

I clutch mine
and answer
Look a loaf

She laughs aloud
music to my ears
her bright eyed smile
tugs at me

Raised eyebrow
You know who else's
birthday it is today?

She loves to tease
knowing how much
I hate him
I cringe and
she bursts into
a new fit of laughter

It's there,
her sister in the
kitchen fixing dinner

I ache to tell her
I've loved her
from the very first day,
that the thought of her
melts away everything
until all that's left
is her smile

Come and eat!
Her sister's voice
drags me back to reality

And the promise
made to never tell
her sister all I felt
Besides,
I think to myself
in true form
she'd never fall
for a guy like me anyway

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (03-17-2003 11:14 AM).]

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2003-03-17 08:12 AM

Come and eat!
Her sister's voice
drags me back to reality

I have sisters too...grin...and?

They've been known to be SERIOUS at times!

absolutely delightful...I loved the battle of rolls...

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-03-17 08:24 AM

like this... nicely captures a moment and a feeling to wrap around it...

one truly never knows who and or what type another falls for... until they invest some time and find out...

good stuff Raph... very nicely done.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-03-17 11:18 AM

K this sister turned out to be a real pain in the @$$

Thanks Cpat and i would have invested but it was a volatile market

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2003-03-17 01:15 PM

Aenimal (Raph?) I like the tenderness of the view from your eyes in this...the fun of the bagel and loaf gave me smile. Much enjoyed!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2003-03-17 01:17 PM

Thank you Raph...enjoyed the read....

Flower
Member

since 2003-03-15

Posts 240
California

6 posted 2003-03-17 01:21 PM

Liked this, the bagel and loaf raised a chuckle.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2003-03-17 01:36 PM

Raph - ok for some odd reason this made me laugh - the loaf part I guess . . . I can hear you saying that . . . and live life without what ifs . . . grab that cloud and fly sweety xxoo

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2003-03-17 02:32 PM

Thanks Martie glad I made you smile

youre welcome Karilea glad you did

Thanks Flower

Thanks Sue glad you laughed, I can't fly too heavy..grin

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2003-03-17 02:33 PM

Considering the name similarity, I had to comment. but I would have anyway. I like your style here.
Sandra

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

10 posted 2003-03-17 02:37 PM

Thanks and btw always been one of my favourite names

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2003-03-17 04:32 PM

Enjoyed..James

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

12 posted 2003-03-17 06:58 PM

please
do out and get drunk tonight........

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

13 posted 2003-03-17 08:00 PM

You are such a treat to read....

Lauren~

I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light
You come to me out of my dreams
Across the night

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

14 posted 2003-03-17 08:46 PM

sorry lol @ Michele - yes please do - and *grin* yourself . . .

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

15 posted 2003-03-17 08:55 PM

Raph, I like the way you let your guard down in this one....

It had a really tender touch to it. I
really like it...belly roll part and all...

Heart hugs,
Ethel

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

16 posted 2003-03-17 09:17 PM

thank James

mish wish i could

Lauren thanks so are your responses

Sue you buying?

Ethel thanks glad you liked it

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

17 posted 2003-03-17 09:38 PM

welllll - seeing as I have such a taste for the stuff lol - my liquor cabinet is stocked!

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