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Only The Woulded Weep
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Only The Woulded Weep |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Only The Wounded Weep I shall check tomorrow There was nothing today So off to bed I descend With feelings of dismay Laying there in solitude I Kept asking myself why The feeling of rejection It was then I began to cry Weeping all my sorrow Another sleepless night My head into the pillow I await the morning light In downhearted despair Heart questions persist Wonder would you care Would I ever be missed The heartfelt penetrated Only the wounded weep I cannot remove my love Feelings went too deep Hope©2003 |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Hope, This is heart touching. It is difficult letting go those we love so deeply, who don't return such. Feelings of rejection do hurt. In any kind of relationship. You captured well, sad emotions. I'm unsure whether a poet is writing a current personal experience. In either case, Heart hugs to you, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Pat , dismay was yesterday , I am feeling more cheerful today Hope |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
This really touched me. Love reading all these great writes. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
ah....coming from another 'wounded'...this touches deeply.....I feel your weeping |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
A very touching write. I'm hoping all is well with you now. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This touched me so much I am speechless. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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