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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-03-17 06:20 AM

48 candles
came and went....

and not a word from you,

no surprise though,

so disappointment
doesn't hang too heavily
right now,

i hoped though,

for a ray of light,
to somehow pierce through
your dungeon of deepening depression,
where the magic smoke of dragons,
has become your faithful lover,

i wished for you to show love again,
the way you sadly told me,
you feared that you've forgotten,

i walked the path of leaves
today,
where fantasy and reality
finally came together for us,

novembers leaves
lay withered now,
surrounding barren trees,
standing still in thick ice,
waiting for a touch of spring,

48 candles
came and went,
again,

i wished for love,

i wished to release myself
from playing the sungoddess
to any more frozen trees,

i too am tired of standing still,

i wished for new love
to come,
and find me.............

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-17-2003 06:58 AM).]

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

1 posted 2003-03-17 07:16 AM

New love will come to you my friend. And, I hope it is a true and everlasting one for you.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-03-17 07:38 AM

nice wish..and do hope it finds you...

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-03-17 08:17 AM

Here's to the abolishment of birthdays. Here Here.
And Mish, may you find it soon

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

4 posted 2003-03-17 10:13 AM

Michele,

The title belies the poem. Standing still, warming the frozen does take time for seeds of love to sprout.
Hang in there, spring is around the corner, may it bring you a sense of renewal and love you seek. Enjoy the variety of your poetry.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

5 posted 2003-03-17 10:48 AM

love will find you

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2003-03-17 11:27 AM

Well, here's a great big hug for the last 48 years....and another one for the next 48!

Sounds like a whole lotta under-appreciation going on here! You deserve better--and better you shall find!

Warm belated birthday hugs,
EA

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2003-03-17 11:51 AM

Michele:

i wished to release myself
from playing the sungoddess
to any more frozen trees,

The sungoddess you will be - always - let everything else stay frozen and breathe . . . - it is Spring - time for change - you deserve it - truly - I loved this as I do all of your writing xxoo

(oh and that lonely birthday feeling - yea - that just passed me by too - keep faith and I dont mean in you know who - in yourself always and the rest will follow)

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

8 posted 2003-03-17 11:52 AM

We always wonder why something so simple for us to give is so hard for another to notice. I liked this a lot..and HB from one with a lot more candles on the cake. Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

9 posted 2003-03-17 11:54 AM

" I love it when a woman says lay it on me baby", nice write.
Jason

Flower
Member

since 2003-03-15

Posts 240
California

10 posted 2003-03-17 01:36 PM

Birthdays can be a real pain, that's for sure. Hope today and tomorrow are better for you.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

11 posted 2003-03-17 06:53 PM

thanks for the nice words

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

12 posted 2003-03-17 11:12 PM

Hope is a double edged sword!
After all a girl can only hold out for so long.

You're getting better all the time girlielocks~ so chalk it up to his loss!

Happy Birthday Michele~ I'm always a day late or two, (the story of my life) but the thought remains the same.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

13 posted 2003-03-17 11:20 PM

thanks blues,
for the nice wishes,

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

14 posted 2003-03-18 01:17 AM

Oh, not another candle without a flame!
so sorry M'shell. Dangit, I do understand this tune.
But Happy Month to you anyway. You do know you get the whole month don't you?

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

15 posted 2003-03-18 02:19 AM

Michele, I love this, and the way you have of telling it like it is.

And, don't know when your birthday was, but Happy Birthday, Lady.

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

bklynboy
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since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

16 posted 2003-03-18 05:39 AM

I hope you had the happiest of birthdays!. Remember, you are not getting older, just better!!! A cliche I know but true. Appreciate each and every birthday, its an event denied many too soon. And finally, love could be right around the corner, or behind the closed door. Maybe the next FedEX or UPS guy????

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

17 posted 2003-03-18 06:26 AM

48 candles??? ..... that's a lot of sunshine!
   Must have had the entire fire department on call!! (he,he,...)

    Hope your day went well .... and many more to follow.
       Happy, happy .....  xx/oo

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

18 posted 2003-03-18 11:31 AM

here's a birthday toast...

"to being kicked and bumping into someone to heal those wounds and love..."

Happy Birthday and best wishes for love!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

19 posted 2003-03-18 12:24 PM

We never know what will come of the perfectly preserved heartbeats of November...something tells me that such clarity will breath a blessed sigh in spring.
Hugs to you my friend. ThisDiamond

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

20 posted 2003-03-18 03:29 PM

You say kiss and I think kick...its all in the attidude...hope you have a happy birthday...with kisses...James

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

21 posted 2004-01-18 07:41 PM

i wished to release myself
from playing the sungoddess
to any more frozen trees,

Poignant Inkgoddess.....

In winter's sunlight,
seemingly melting icicles
only grow longer.

~C

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

22 posted 2008-01-29 10:09 PM

I love birthdays!

ARCTIC WIND

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