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Lu
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0 posted 2003-03-17 03:13 AM


This is my first post so please, take it easy on me


This world do i walk alone,
tis no ones fault but my own.
Through curses of my own making
my very world is breaking.
Half of a soul do I hold,
searching for the other am I.
But never shall I find
that which doth hide,
beyond my grasp it shall stay
hidden from my sight.
So do I search
every day and every night.
That which i do seek,
hidden in another
given life eternal
in the arms of a lover.


Lu

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-03-17 03:38 AM


great first write! Welcome to Passions!
Mysteria
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2 posted 2003-03-17 03:50 AM



Well now, there is nothing to say about this first post of yours - except it's wonderful!  I do believe that searching is all of the fun, especially if you are young!  Or young at heart!

        


                   
R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
Aretha Franklin  



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Paul Wilson
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3 posted 2003-03-17 04:27 AM


Lu~ A very good first post.
Welcome to Passions and our family of friends. I hope your stay is enjoyable...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

Sunshine
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4 posted 2003-03-17 06:57 AM



Looking forward to reading more of your poetry, Lu.  Welcome to Passions!

    Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

1slick_lady
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5 posted 2003-03-17 08:44 AM


welcome to passions...helen
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(big hugggssssssss) Awwwwwww, this is a beautiful debut filled with love and yearning, sweet friend, may all your dreams come true and your heart singing with happiness, yay, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Lu, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lu, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton














"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2003-03-17 09:13 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Much enjoyed your first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~


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vlraynes
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8 posted 2003-03-17 07:49 PM



Lu~
Welcome to Passions!
I enjoyed your first post.
~Vicky
P.S. Check your e-mail for a special greeting.

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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garysgirl
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9 posted 2003-03-17 08:02 PM


Lu, I enjoyed your first post
and hope to read more of your work.
I hope you enjoy it here, and



Hugs,
Ethel.....garysgirl

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Chanson
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10 posted 2003-03-17 08:10 PM


Hello Lu. Welcome to Passions.
You will find that the members
are all pretty much an easygoing bunch
and we don't bite...too hard..honest! *s

Lovely poem.

littlewing
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11 posted 2003-03-17 08:29 PM


Lu - Welcome to PIP!  Nice write - I understand it much too much:

given life eternal
in the arms of a lover.

lol no we dont bite - just nibble here and there - you will love it here  xxoo

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2003-03-17 09:03 PM


Welcome to Passions! Hope your "searching" ends in "finding"! Enjoyed your first post and look forward to reading more!

Warm welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

Jason Lyle
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13 posted 2003-03-17 10:23 PM


Welcome, no need to be easy, this was a very nice post.
Jason

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