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The Dreams That I Dream
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The Dreams That I Dream |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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The Dreams That I Dream I am but a simple man with simple dreams I always thought that love was out of reach Till you came along and proved me wrong And so I owe you everything I have Very few people ever get to feel love like this And I am so indebted to you for giving it to me I have always read about love and happiness But nothing I have ever read compares to this The way you give of yourself completely Just to make me happy and so full of cheer Is more than any person in this world deserves And I am truly grateful for it all How can anyone ever repay such love and devotion? I just don’t think it possible to express the gratitude But I will spend every moment of every day To give to you all that you give to me For you are the dreams that I dream By: Jeffrey Carter |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nicely done! beautiful write. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
A wonderful write.... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
beautiful, and smile-worthy, Jeffrey M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeffrey~ Soooooooooo nice to see you here~ 'you are the dreams that I dream' LOVE it ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Jeff, really touching poem. I know she will love it. Sandra |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Hey there, Bro! Loved this one. If poetry truly reflects life, then it would seem you are very appy these days. I hope that's true. We'll have to catch up sometime. We haven't talked in ages! Love ya, Bro!  All writing comes |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Jeffrey Your words were overflowing with love and were very much enjoyed. Here is a little something for you and your lady. "Love...... to melt and be like a running brook that sings its melody to the night." Take care.......Sue I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins [This message has been edited by Suetang (04-03-2003 10:32 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Just don't let go!!!! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Jeffrey, Really good to see you around... and this is a great write ... regards, sudhir |
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