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Open Poetry #25

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lost_star
Member

since 2003-03-15

Posts 114
NY, U.S.A

0 posted 2003-03-16 11:22 PM

I woke up today and looked out the window,
A beautiful sunny sky,
The smell of coffee fills the kitchen,

~ I can't believe you left this ~

I stepped outside and felt the sun embrase me,
A butterfly floats above the mailbox,

~ How could you leave this ~

The dog is running around the yard chasing squirells again,
The neighbors kids are playing hide and seek,

~ You're missing out on so much ~

I made dinner and sat on the porch swing but it just didn't feel right,
The sun is setting but it's not as pretty tonight,

~ How coul you give up on me ~

There's nothing on T.V so I head off to bed,
But I feel so lost in here,
It's to empty...to quiet...to lonely,

~ We only have one chance here, why did you have to cut yours so short ~

Tomorrow I will wake up to another beautiful day,
Another beautiful day you are going to miss out on,

~ Was it worth it? ~

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-03-16 11:25 PM

This has a lot of truth in it. Great write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-03-17 12:49 PM

God - star - this IS IN MY HEAD - I know how you feel - know too well - sad but nice write xxoo

lost_star
Member

since 2003-03-15

Posts 114
NY, U.S.A

3 posted 2003-03-17 12:58 PM

Thank you Loner_23 and littlewing.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-03-17 02:53 AM

very sad to me

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