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An Irish Pantoum
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An Irish Pantoum |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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An Irish Pantoum My eyes of green wear me today In the springing of my Irish heart The winds blew away the clouds of gray Hearing promise of a new love’s start In the springing of my Irish heart I am again a young colleen Hearing promise of a new love’s start I’m led back to love’s sweet dream I am again a young colleen For by your touch of giving all I’m led back to love’s sweet dream To see you stand again, so tall For by your touch of giving all That my heart would plead you stay To see you stand again, so tall My eyes of green wear me today. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
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'In the springing of my Irish heart I am again a young colleen Hearing promise of a new love’s start I’m led back to love’s sweet dream' Beautiful as the spring like day it was! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Karilea... Made these Irish eyes smile! Erin Go Bragh! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Karilea, this was delightful and I love the following line: My eyes of green wear me today. Everyone's Irish on St. Patty's Day especially if one lives in Boston! Huggles, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well done, colleen Karilea!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
karilea...didn't know the seed was green that planted the beauty of you poetree!  |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Where's me Guinness??? Me pints a wee dry for m'likin'. Definately, you have me seeing green. ~You might say I'm a Dreamer, but I'm not the only one... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beautiful, Karilea! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Lovely green words... Must have gotten a great dose of Sunshine, eh??..  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Lovely |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Yes, a young colleen...I especially love how the final stanza came out! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lovely as the colleen that penned it! I am half Irish and half Scottish, but today I'm all Irish! Happy St. Paddy's Day hugs to you! Linda |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
"I am again a young colleen" The lure of being young again is so integral to us, isn't it. This is a lovely write. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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