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Open Poetry #25

Feelings

Silver_Tryst
Member

since 2003-03-10

Posts 64
MT

0 posted 2003-03-16 05:39 PM

Feelings

its that feeling i get when you are around,
you seem to speak to my heart without making a sound,
You lift me up to the highest of stars,
In the gentle cradle of your arms,
I think its the way you look in my eyes,
Thoses gentle sighs,
Thoses silent cries,
Thoses loving ties,
I feel these things when im with you,
And i know in my heart these feekings are true,
We have been givin the chance to start a new,
Where we go now is up to you,

Rdz9
Member

since 2003-03-16

Posts 142
MT, USA

1 posted 2003-03-16 05:42 PM

Smooth. Nice flowing write.

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

2 posted 2003-03-16 05:51 PM

Nice write, and welcome.
Jason

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2003-03-16 05:54 PM

Enjoyed...James

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