Open Poetry #25 |
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Brown Eyes, Green Eyes |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA ![]() |
You are brown eyes green eyes are me Within our eyes there is much to see Is seen what has been in times past And hopes for the future when together at last Emotions are left sometimes unsaid But in our eyes they are always read The happiness we feel when together shows clear Or sadness when departing not having each other near Our story these eyes will always tell When apart from each other loneliness shows without fail Our love for each other in our eyes is found My eyes the green ones and yours the brown ~*~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-16-2003 09:00 PM).] |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ethel, Tender and sweet write. Love it! Hugs, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Pat. I appreciate that..... ![]() Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Almost makes me miss being in love! *W* ![]() |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very lovely and sweet! Eric |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
I agree. Makes me miss being in love too. This was a sweet beautiful write ethel. :smile; |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Duncan, it's a wonderful way to be... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
James, I've glad that you enjoyed it.... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Eric. I'm glad that you liked it. ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, those are such pretty graphics. I wish I could do those so bad. Maybe one day I'll learn.. ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Albert, thank you very much. I really appreciate your sweet words. ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Nice poem, Ethel. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Nice poem, Ethel. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nice Ethel..love your use of colour here as well. ~Smiles & Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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skyshine![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
How sweet, Ethel! The eyes really are the mirror to the soul. ![]() Liz It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got... |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Sue. I'm glad that you liked it. ![]() "Love makes the world go around" ~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-16-2003 10:10 PM).] |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Nancy. That was a little bit trouble, changing the font color that way. It was fun, though. I wish I could do those graphics like Noah. He can really do them, can't he? ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Liz, I believe so, too. Eyes speak without words. Thanks for reading and replying. ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ethel - so very sweet - I liked this a lot: Emotions are left sometimes unsaid But in our eyes they are always read Always in the eyes and in the kiss . . . xxoo |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, you're right.....seen in the eyes..felt in the kiss..... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very sweet ![]() |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it a lot ![]() |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I enjoyed this , Ethel...very much!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A soft wisp of sweet love... Springtime hugs, Linda |
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