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Already Buried
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Already Buried It's as if I am the alcoholic being addicted to you, addicted to my life that I don't want to give up. There you sit. Here I sit. I'm in pain, how about you? Pain and fear and guilt and fear, my heart pounding, knowing the end is nearer every day. What's a tear between friends, one eye, then the other, trying to remove you from my life. Yes, I am already buried in the memories of you. Watching "28 Days" wondering if there is a place we can go, those of us who need love, those of us who have love to give, when all is taken away from us but what we hold inside. There you sit. Here I sit. Pain, and fear and guilt and fear... are burying me today. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (03-16-2003 11:27 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
nakd - very nice thoughts on this St Paddys Day - know that feeling all too well - beautiful writing as always xxoo |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, the memories are sometimes so painful sometimes....even the good ones when the person they are made with is no longer around. Loneliness and thoughts of what might have been can torment the mind. Heart Hugs to you friend, Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a very sad piece...I can relate to this. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Pain...we all feel it, we all live varying degrees of it, yet only you can pen it so well. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...deeply expressive. Great poem. Eric |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Deep indeed. If you could see me, I would be standing up clapping wildly! Wonderful read.   |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Watching "28 Days" wondering if there is a place we can go, those of us who need love, those of us who have love to give, when all is taken away from us but what we hold inside.  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Maureen, I understand your feelings here very well. |
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