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Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

0 posted 2003-03-15 10:33 PM

Rose Petals lead their way up the stairs
Leading their way to a scented bath
The candles reflecting off the walls
The bubbles shimmering in the glow
Lilac in the air
Relaxing as the pampering begins
You'll do nothing tonight
I'll do it all
The bath is over
Body's cleaned, Hair's washed
Slowly, softly the drying begins
As you stand and enjoy the feeling
Follow the flowers to the bedroom
Sunflower candles, your favorite, shine
The music set low
Barry, Luther, Marvin, Al Green
As I massage you lovingly
Exploring every muscle
Removing every worry, every care
The loving starts, unhurried
There is nowhere but here
No one, just us in the world
As we lie together
And drift to sleep
Holding each other
Till the end of time.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2003-03-15 11:44 PM

Lovely...James

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

2 posted 2003-03-15 11:47 PM

Very gentle and loving.

Elizabeth

It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got...
--Sheryl Crow

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

3 posted 2003-03-15 11:55 PM

oh get a grip....*yawwwwwn*......you couldn't have written BETTER???????

;-)~~~

[This message has been edited by KristieSue (03-15-2003 11:58 PM).]

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

4 posted 2003-03-15 11:57 PM

FINALLY, an honest answer lol... However, I saw your reaction to that scene in 40 Days and 40 Nights...

[This message has been edited by Ringo (03-16-2003 12:00 AM).]

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

5 posted 2003-03-15 11:59 PM

LOL

yeah, but that involved NO touch....you still have to use your hands in this poem

:-)~

LOL

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-03-16 02:42 AM

Ringo - this is just beautiful - what a lucky lady . . . xxoo

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

7 posted 2003-03-16 04:02 PM

Hello Bradly

Such a sensuous picture you have painted with your words.......absolutely beautiful.

"Love....'tis second life,
it grows into the soul,
warms every vein, and
beats in every pulse."

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

8 posted 2003-03-16 05:22 PM

..Ringo../\..very good; enjoyed reading your poem; very calming, too..

../\..Spiros

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