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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2003-02-17 11:12 AM

And your every tear
falls to a hidden
Desire -
As they ride a trail of
Sweet release.

I meet each desire with a kiss.

And taste the mystery
of their gift.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2003-02-17 11:14 AM

Ericc - your poetry always written well, like them much...

BC

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

2 posted 2003-02-17 11:17 AM

Ericc, you have a delightful way
of putting thoughts into
one's mind...

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-02-17 11:18 AM

Eric, I love the way you can put so much into
such few words.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

cinnamongirl
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since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

4 posted 2003-02-17 12:03 PM

Truly beautiful.

Love,
Moca

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2003-02-17 12:24 PM

Amazing Eric...how you do this...just amazing.
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-02-17 12:30 PM

in awe...

SweetSerenity
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since 2003-02-16

Posts 52
Canada

7 posted 2003-02-17 12:40 PM

I really enjoyed that one.
It really made me smile.

~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-02-17 12:42 PM

Ver good poem.. Enjoyed every word... Love poems just have a certain thing that make you feel good... Unless their like mine, and they tell ya how love is bad sometimes..

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

carol
Senior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

9 posted 2003-02-17 01:12 PM

Ericc, Very nice

always treat others the way you want to be treated
Love from Rita

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2003-02-17 01:26 PM

(smiles) This is sooooooo gorgeous and faithful, sweet friend, I believe every tear means something so very special and with your compassion you will make each of her tears turn into hopes and heart hugs! (big hugggssssss) This is beautiful, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Etain
Member

since 2003-02-22

Posts 92
The moon...

11 posted 2003-03-18 08:57 PM

...

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

12 posted 2003-03-18 09:29 PM

Lovely, just lovely. Enjoyed the read of this.

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

13 posted 2003-03-18 09:43 PM

Some very special feelings grace this page.
So well done my friend. TD

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

14 posted 2003-03-19 06:52 PM

Ericc - my goodness - you just keep getting better and better since I have arrived - this is just perfect . . . xxoo

Sunkissed
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

15 posted 2003-04-20 05:04 AM

I think this poem deserves another round of applause.

Sunkissed.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

16 posted 2003-04-20 10:40 AM

These tears are pearls of beauty! Makes me think of how men usually react to tears (they are uneasy), because they don't know how to cope with them ... if only all men could have your understanding, such grace and such beauty in handling tears .....
wow, this is magnificent and yes ... it well deserves another round!
Love, Margherita

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

17 posted 2003-04-23 11:56 PM

Beautiful....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

18 posted 2003-04-25 11:56 AM

How soft, delicate, and beautiful

Love it,
Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

KoKo
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since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

19 posted 2003-04-27 11:44 AM

This is just awesome...Great work here, Eric!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

20 posted 2003-05-26 03:24 AM

still incredible

SweetSerenity
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since 2003-02-16

Posts 52
Canada

21 posted 2003-05-29 01:34 PM

Only a few lines.
But yet it hit the soul.
Amazing work.

~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~

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