Open Poetry #25 |
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Wait For The Roses |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone ![]() |
I waited for rose petals sweet to drift upon my pillowed hair I waited, but they never came I slept without anything there. I waited for the candle's glow to flicker round my bed at night illuminators of romance but love was no where in my sight. I waited until I got bored and bought a sheet of roses red some candles of a fragrant scent it seems I must make my own bed. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sandra, I love this. So very true. Wonderful attitude. To nurture our ownselves, so important. Hugs, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sandra - you and me both sweety - this is just aching . . . xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice one Sandra! I enjoyed this. |
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Amara Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 158East of the moon, west of the sun. |
*nods* Good for you! Don't wait around to be pampered...treat yourself! Nice sweet smelling bubble baths...yummy sundaes...mmm, delicious. 'Specially with caramel sauce. But I'm off topic, aren't I? Lovely poem. Blessed Be Thee! - Stephanie Every heart has hidden treasures...a secret wish, a silent dream, and a cherished love. [Unknown] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
That's true, sometimes we have to keep the candles burning and find our comfort in their glow so that we don't dwell alone in the darkness. But still~~~ Nice poem Sandra, it's so good to read you here. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I know this too well, an elegant write [This message has been edited by Aenimal (03-15-2003 01:12 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-15-2003 04:35 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Never hurts to get ready...roses are nice...James |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh yes, lil sis, all the waiting hurts, and making the bed is more fun with two! This is my favorite...I love the feel, the softness, the longing, and the images. Great job!! (As Always!!!!) ![]() Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There is a sense of hope in this, Cat... it's when we get on with things, that the better moments happen... very good... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hey Sandra! How ya doin' sweetie? So good to see you here... Loved the poem. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
catalinamoon - wait no more, a dozen roses for you... BC |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sandra!! How wonderful to see a post by you here once again. Hope all is well. You go right ahead and be good to yourself. Get some chocolates to go along with the roses! hugs, Chris ![]() "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, How beautifully written, and perfectly portrayed. I "make that same bed" everynight....... Love to you, Elise |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sandra, nice to see you again. I've missed reading your wonderful poetry. Hope you are well ... hugs, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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skyshine![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
That's how it goes sometimes....we have to go out and get it ourselves if we really want it. Well done Sandra! Wise words! ![]() Elizabeth It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got... |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sandra, this is a beautiful poem, with lots of determination blended in. I like that. ![]() Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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