Sunshine on a Stem (Inspired by Sea)

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Open Poetry #25

Sunshine on a Stem (Inspired by Sea)

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

0 posted 2003-02-17 10:37 AM

Sunshine on a stem, wild and boundless grow
when falling from your braided hair
daisies perfect bouquet!

Rf

[This message has been edited by Robert Frazier (02-17-2003 10:40 AM).]

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2003-02-17 10:40 AM

Robert - Lovely write. Short with a lot of meaning...

BC

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-02-17 10:41 AM

enjoyed... short and still intense in imagery and possible meaning...

good stuff here!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2003-02-17 11:29 AM

beautiful! I like this very much.....glad to have inspired

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2003-02-17 11:31 AM

Robert,
Nice one, enjoyed.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2003-02-17 11:37 AM

really like the 'braided hair' line, I could easily envision the sunshine glistening upon the strands and then falling away with gentle movements

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2003-02-17 11:58 AM

"Sunshine on a Stem"---delightful!

Warm hugs,
EA

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

7 posted 2003-02-17 12:01 PM

The dandelions are still
in their winter sleep,
but are now dreaming
golden dreams
because of you...

well done, Sir...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2003-02-17 12:17 PM

Amber eyes open~
Daisies waltz with a soft breeze
In three quarter time.

*Daisies are my favourite flower*

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

9 posted 2003-02-17 12:19 PM

Thank you Lady, I'm so eager for the change!

Rf

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

10 posted 2003-02-17 12:53 PM

Enchantress, An armful of daisies for you!

Rf

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