Open Poetry #25 |
Nothing Seems The Same |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
There was a moment when You whispered – "Turn to me" I turned…and now nothing seems The same. The world turned with me. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I like this.Nice job. Jason |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I like this...but then I like brevity that speaks. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Powerfully sensuous... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You have discovered the true source of Love! Your poem leaves no doubt. Love, Margherita |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Aaaahhh... such an incredible, delicious, ecstatic moment- when you turn to face Love, the world does turn with you... for all is tethered to that most beautiful of all things, that connects all souls to that Light... ..and the world turned with me. And nothing will ever be the same again. Thank you... Love, Moca [This message has been edited by cinnamongirl (02-16-2003 07:16 PM).] |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
so much i so little - wow. -majnu |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL |
Love the poem, lst line did it for me! A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember, |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
I am so impressed with your work - another case of quality far outweighing quantity. Great!!!!!!!!!!! |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Ericc, this is so nice always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes..powerfully sensual... enjoyed this. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Extremely well done Eric as always! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Oh my gosh, I love the revolving door action of this, sweet friend, this made me smile too, may love always make your world seem enchanting, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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