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just a junkie
Member

since 2003-03-04

Posts 53

0 posted 2003-03-04 10:53 PM

Liquid Rainbows

Paint the world with all
The colors of
Insanity
And watch it bleed
Liquid rainbows for
All to see
Appreciate in
Wondrous glory
What a bleeding world
Has to offer a
Stagnant existence
Sell me liquid rainbows
In holographic syringes
To inject into
My eye
So beauty is only
A gaze away
Blood turns to paint
And I can leave my story
On an empty canvas
Beneath liquid rainbows
Where hate procreates
And dreams will
Rest in peace.

Just a Junkie

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

1 posted 2003-03-05 01:33 AM

Strong images..........nice read.
Jason

Chameleon
Member

since 2002-08-07

Posts 99
Australia

2 posted 2003-03-07 02:06 AM

surreal images. what my dreams reflect.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-03-08 11:10 AM

junkie - soon you shall see , my friend:

Sell me liquid rainbows
In holographic syringes
To inject into
My eye

nice writing xxoo

gpc
Junior Member

since 2003-03-01

Posts 43

4 posted 2003-03-08 02:22 PM

Ok, this is my favourite poem EVER! i absoutely love this. im keeping this one forever, get this published!!!

JP
Senior Member

since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

5 posted 2003-03-09 04:55 PM

Excellent.

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

WisprWnd
Junior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 34

6 posted 2003-03-10 09:40 AM

I wonder about you.

If I had any love to give, I would send you some.

Just a junkie? No,No, My fellow wordsmith.
You are an artist..
..but I know I don't have to tell you that.
Don't go away.

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

7 posted 2003-03-14 11:01 AM

You surely have a grasp on the difficult trek that lies before us in today's culture. As a matter of fact, I took a copy of your "Suffer the Children" for my students in residential rehabilitation to read... They all said "Thank you"...