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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“START OF BEGIN” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Once I sat somewhere behind the moon, waiting for love whispers from you, they suddenly came one and again, with affection only as you can do… My heart beat faster in tepid response, your words I felt entering inside me, with the last one I knew your trace, my being warmed deeply in symmetry… Two are felt as one, yet distance is great, loneliness becomes the forte within, memories are sweeter inside one's mind, when the return is the start of begin… ~~~~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is a very beautiful poem. I loved it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, this is very romantic, with a touch of longing in it....  "Love makes the world go around" ~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-14-2003 12:16 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Bill...yet hauntingly sad. ~Bid hugs and soft smiles~  ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice Bill.. and such a tender gentle feel to your words.. I enjoyed |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Another beautifully worded write Bill. hugs to you, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Loved everything! . Good job!  Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Bill, this is lovely but sad, sweet friend, I have no Joanna anymore but her fantasies will always be in my mind hoping maybe someday I can experience the real beginning of some true love! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Bill, This sounds like it is a beginning for real, yet a tad unclear. Whatever the circumstances your writing is so soft and tender it leaves a good feeling, always. Love how you write! Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I really like the romanticism in this one. It's warm and sweet. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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