Open Poetry #25 |
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Wheel of Time |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla ![]() |
Wheel of Time The wheels of fortune spins in lime Dissolving all that live in time. Bleaching, reaching flesh and bone It does away with all but tone. Now tone rings out the universe It sings in every stars disperse. It is the constant hum and drum Of everything that has a sum. It is the noise of existence The only one of ploys persistence And if you listen close its send You can hear beginning and end. Now do not ask me what this means I’d only answer you in dreams I know naught, beginnings and end And very little of the send I only know the tone is there But even this I would not swear. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (02-17-2003 09:02 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes..I think the tone is there as well.. nice read this morning Sy.. I enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Capt, Thank you for the time and read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Much enjoyed the morning read Sy! Tea's ready... ~Morning hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Now do not ask me what this means I'd only answer you in dreams I know naught, beginnings and end And very little of the send ====================================== Once again, your gifted pen ... speaks with humilty, but you see, and forgive me ... I must mothily disagree. You in true ... do hold the secret of the send ... you wrote the book of beginings and the poetic bend of ends. So now I smile at your attemp to sway in versed fiction, grateful to begin each day with your cadenced diction. ![]() *ww* ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Thank you dear, be right there. ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, And you are my Tinkerbell forever more. WWRS ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - another enjoyed write from you... BC |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ah, I love this. "It is the noise of existence". And so it is! Enjoyed greatly, this makes me smile. Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Lady In White![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Now you have my brain spinning... because your wheel has many spokes, and I held on to each one... Thank you Sy... for always leaving us a gift in the morning... |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, dear Seymour, for a spin on your wheel of time.... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill Thank you Bill I appreciate the reply. Pat, A smile is surely worth while. ![]() Lady In White You are a delight. ![]() garysgirl I'm glad you enjoyed the ride. ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T.! It pleases me to no "end" that this day, as do others, is "beginning" with you! Have a great one! EA |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Oh Seymour, I just love how your world seems to rotate, sweet friend, your multi-faceted visions always seem to fascinate me, this is wonderful, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel It's nice to have an angel in your corner. ![]() Noah, Thanks for the sweet meat. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Sy..this is really well done my friend... |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Very nicely wriiten in a lot a thought. I really liked the line "You can hear beginning and end". |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
D.Lester Thank you for the read and nice comment. |
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