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Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

0 posted 2003-02-16 05:51 PM

I look over my shoulder yet I do not see it,
I long for yester year.
My childhood gone, my youth long passed,
But she swore she'd meet me here.

A pact we made, we sealed it twice,
I remember well the kiss.
Sweet tasting joy, like cinammon,
I wait again for this.

The hours pass, my heart falls low,
But I guess I already knew.
I had my time,
So where is my youth?
I left it back there with you.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-02-16 06:02 PM

(big hugggssssssss) I know this feeling ever so well, dearest friend, I grew up a sad boy and never got to live very happy days as a little boy, and whenever I dream I feel young with my dream girl and I want her ever so much so I can feel happily ever after! (sigh) This is touching, sweet friend, I send angel hugs of comfort out to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Albert, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2003-02-16 06:57 PM

Great rhythm .... that shows that youth is still there! Impatience shows it too!
Very lovely.
Margherita

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

3 posted 2003-02-16 07:45 PM

Thank you sweet Margherita!!! Yes i am impatient still at my age (not that old though) hahaha

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-02-17 12:19 PM

I like the feelings you express in this piece. I must give you a 2 thumbs up.

Cold hands means a warm heart

sellout007
Member

since 2003-02-14

Posts 108
Suburbs of Chicago, IL

5 posted 2003-02-17 12:51 PM

"A pact we made, we sealed it twice,
I remember well the kiss.
Sweet tasting joy, like cinammon,
I wait again for this."

Oh that sweet cinammony kiss! Love that block of words! Kudos albert!

A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember,

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-02-17 03:28 AM

awesome! love the ending! what a write! I love the ones I can relate to in my own life, and this is definately one of them...

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2003-02-17 10:29 AM

Albert - thought a lot about this one, and it's so true, where is my youth?

BC

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

8 posted 2003-02-17 06:12 PM

Thank you everyone. I am so glad you are all enjoying my work!

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