Open Poetry #25 |
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The Fairest |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Amongst beauty walks no other, But her name which I speak humbly. Not stars, nor sun, nor moon, Could shine so. For luminous are the rays, Created by the smile she wears. Accomplished hands leaves one Breathless with each touch. I stand nervously, In the sight of God's perfection, But give into Her willingly And swear to stand at Her side, Until eternity passes thrice. My dedication Is endless. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
How romantic. I love it Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Thank you sweet Loner!! |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Yes Noah I know it will happen. THANK YOU |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Albert, I have just discovered that you are a wonderfully romantic poet!!! Your writings are touching and inviting, and I hope that your collections never end!!!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen! ~~S~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Thank you Sunny. I shall pen on!! Thank you passing! |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL |
It would be a bueatiful world if we all just had someone that cared for us like that. Wonderful that was!~ A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember, |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Thank you sellout! And indeed the world WOULD be beautiful if everyone cared for eachother in that speacial way!! |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
I don't know what I can say what the others have not already said...But you are a wonderful writer and I can't wait to read more of your work!!!!! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Thank you again koko...I am still blushing... :-) |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Albert, this is very beautiful. I love it... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
thank you garys!! that means a lot to me!! |
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