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Open Poetry #25

Irreverence

just a junkie
Member

since 2003-03-04

Posts 53

0 posted 2003-03-13 10:27 AM

Irreverence

Propped against daggared pillows
On a bed of
Boiling acid
Irreverence lives
Inside the walls
Infecting the occupant inside
Do not inhale the
Poisoned air
Which fornicates in
Hell
Ptomaine scented candles
Have their own way
Of making life
Worth dying
The wallpaper
Sheds some tears each night
And Humms to
The wordless songs
Inside my
Disgrace.

Just a Junkie

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

1 posted 2003-03-13 08:04 PM

this is so powerful and vivid.
I read it earlier and liked it but couldn't decide what to say. Still not quite sure... but I like it in a pained and grimacing kind of way.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-03-14 01:45 AM

Junkie - powerful write here - I got the feeling that I couldnt breathe here - stifled up within myself - held captive by me - awesome and utterly painful xxoo

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