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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Their eyes have seen the darkness have met the soul within Yet, they did not hear nor listen To the rushing of the wind when it brushed . . . Ohhh . . . so gently by fallen tears An angel gracing their every step and movement like a concerto in Heaven - but now I understand - They could not love you Perhaps they never will But still . . . I tried to enlighten I tried to explain Shattered heart in vain Pain go gently from me now Please . . . For my love was true Yet they did not listen Perhaps they never will But still . . . "The story of life is quicker than the wink of an eye, the story of love is hello and goodbye. Until we meet again." - James Marshall Hendrix [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-13-2003 07:03 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...but still... eternal hope... Thank you, Sue... there is always a perhaps, maybe, still... hope. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
beatiful and sad, just how i love them.. you've listened tho, havent you?  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
heartrenching, you have sum splainin to do later |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
heart hugs....  Lauren~ Take me where the tides start |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes..the sadness and the cling to hope... still. very nicely written. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sue, Such a gentle heartfelt write. My take on this, from my experiences, is simply some are spiritually blind. And, only that being higher than an angel or a human can cause ~sight~. But, where there is love there is hope. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Have I mentioned lately how much I love your poems!? *whispers* I actually printed two out thus far...just something about them..you know how you can just feel it? blah anyways sorry lol..*goes now* ciao.. If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very lovely...you are quickly becoming one of my favourite writers here. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
littlewing - this was a pleasure to read, and I am going back to read it again! Well done! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Stolen Simplicity Junior Member
since 2002-11-07
Posts 22Canadian |
Thta was really nice. Well written and heartfelt |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - a very heartfelt write. You have a way with words, and writing them with feelings... BC |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sun eternal hope - yes thank you Michele - yes you got it - more times than you know Raph - TY truly - arent all of mine like that though & some splainin? Heyyy Ricky . . . . (Ricardo that is lol) always means a lot to me when you like my writing Lauren TY for reading CPat - thanks - clinging no but wishing . . . Pat - nicely said - thank you I agree C - OMG how very sweet - you have no idea how good that makes me feel - thank you so much - what beautiful words for me! hehehe you live on Sesame Street - I just noticed that lol Ericc - TY coming from you means so much Nancy - Oh My - more beautiful words - thank you so much means so much to me havent been here that long Night - thank you - glad you like it Simplicity & vandana - thank you so much Bill - coming from you that means a lot Thanks guys xxoo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, this is a really pretty poem. All your poems seem so real. I like the way you write them. I'm glad you came here to be part of this "Family Of Friends".  Hugs, Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ethel - you touch me deep - and I must say if you have ever read anything of Morrison -he referred to his band, "The Doors" - as a "feast of friends" - his eternal union - complete - whole - private - this is what you reminded me of with your lovely words and thank you - makes me feel at home xxoo |
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DarkSide_Blues Junior Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 41Fl, Usa. |
Wow...a depressing peice, but in a good way, if that's possible...Very nice! I enjoyed! ^_^ \V/ |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
it hurts, aches, so much when they just ~can't~ listen... kind of makes a person feel guilty. But still... I like your hope, I can feel a gentle determination here. Very good and very much enjoyed.Thank you Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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just a junkie Member
since 2003-03-04
Posts 53 |
Magically expressed. I very much enjoyed this one. Just a Junkie |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
DarkSide - Alyssa & Junkie - thank you so much for reading - means a lot to me and yes Alyssa agreed xxoo |
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Little_One Junior Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 34montana |
Littlewing, It is such a great pleasure that you love to read my poetry, since im such a young poet, at the age of 14. It means alot to take after a great poet as yourself. I hope I will take after your lead in my days to come. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Little One - how sweet of you to bring this back up - and what a compliment - well at 14 you have a lifetime of writing ahead of you and already OMG you are quite amazing - the utmost compliment you have given me here *smiling* xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-17-2003 09:36 PM).] |
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Silver_Tryst Member
since 2003-03-10
Posts 64MT |
I like the write, and i want to also thank you for reading my poetry, Shayne |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Shayne - your writing is lovely - yvw - and TY for this xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! I love the sad-beautiful ones |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
littlewing~ This is so touching. Your words flow like a gentle stream. Thanks for sharing.The end says it all." But Still"...Paul  "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
sad sad sad, but beautiful.... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Shadows - Paul & Kristie - TY sooo much - ahhh this one was a sad one huh? But still . . . thank you xxoo |
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