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Sweet Chocolate Kiss (Revisited)
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Sweet Chocolate Kiss (Revisited) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sweet Chocolate Kiss (Revisited) Some may discount or dismiss the importance of a chocolate kiss. But I will never lessen it's value or let it fall by the wayside. For I have been the recipient of her chocolate kises before and I am filled with a desire to receive many more. As long as I am able to yearn for her lips I will always desire her sweet chocolate kiss. JamesLee February12 2003 [This message has been edited by JamesMichael (02-17-2003 06:07 AM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sweet and nice Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very sweet and touching |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Mmmmm, yummy sweet James! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Dang, that's a good one James. (one tiny typo to fix) I only have vanilla, strawberry or raspberry kisses...I'm not a chocoholic. But this is a tasty little kissing poem anyway.  |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
How romantic. I love it Cold hands means a warm heart |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
James,very nice and sweet always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh James, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile as I love chocolate and it is one of my big weaknesses! (big hugggsssssss) May her cocoa smile always melt your heart, sweet friend, yay, I placed my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Gotta love those kisses!  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I was just leaving when my eyes caught the chocolate kiss .... and well I did to read it, because it's really lovely and ... stirring. Margherita |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
So sweet it gives you a tooth ache!  |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Wow James! Another work of art from your talented pen. I like the milk chocolate ones the best! Take care......Sue I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins [This message has been edited by Suetang (02-18-2003 09:13 PM).] |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
This is good, at first i thought you were writing about the "Candy" until i got to the end. Thank You for sharing. |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
 Well written!! A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Kethry, Brad, Enchantress, Midnite, the loner, carol, Noah, Poet DeVine, Margherita, Albert, Suetang, Amature and Dark Kisses... Amature I am talking about the chocolate and a kiss...you place a piece of chocolate in your mouth, preferably a chocolate kiss but other chocolates work fine, and you kiss someone that is close to you, taking it into your mouth and then into hers and any other variations until finally the candy is almost consumed and then you can laugh at each other when you see the chocolate all over each others lips and in some cases the face...It adds a new dimension to a kiss...James |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Ahhh....who can't resist the temptation of a chocolate kiss....NOT ME!!! Very sweet!!! Bridgette  |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
A sweet read PoetFriendJames... Hugs2u... *~coco~* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
mmmmmmmmmm |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I love all the thoughts behind these chocolate kisses... Your words are simply put, but very wonderfully put... and I love this work... You are the ever romantic writer, my friend... Regards, Sudhir |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
As if kisses weren't sweet enough you had to go and make them chocolate! Who cares about the calories anyway? *L Sweetly written, James. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
sweet and tasty this one[This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-22-2003 10:29 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I hershey kisses... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Justbleu, Coco Baci, passing shadows, Sudhir, Chanson, ecrivan and garysgirl for the nice responses. Chanson that was a neat response...you have encouraged me to write a little more about the sweet chocolate kiss...I hope you don't mind that I include a quote by you...the poem will be called "Kiss and Tell"..James |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
drinking hot chocolate right now and smiling at your replies to this. Only you SBJ..only you would come up with a new kind of kissing technique.  oouuu eeee oouu ah ah ting tang walla walla bing bang ... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now just how appropriate is this for Valentine's Day anyway, and great for the book JM, good luck on it. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
enjoyed the read... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Awwww, this is so sweet. Got to love them those chocolate kisses. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
James - somehow I missed this one, my vote is cast... BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
some day I will have to try that James *s M |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
Senuously sweet! "The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
JM, Cool. Nice submission. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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