Open Poetry #25 |
Leavings of a Lesser Sun |
Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
begat of ancient seedlings and a lesser sun, ripped from gnarled limbs by winds of darker autumn, falling not to bed aground and wake a greener spring, but smart-piercing earth's core to bitter hollow it is there, the voiceless unknowns stand on crater's edge buried alive in rust of Cause, choking on a burning sky; and I, am deaf-blind in the distance, for it seems Death does not leave footprints in sand, walk on water, or climb mountains-- it simply falls where it once stood wearing yesterday's mask; I watched then, I watch now, how small we all are on a screen measured in inches somewhere, inside that box is a mother's phantom pain where once was flesh and blood, and a father's seeded garden tilled to grave and I wonder, when they see us how small do we appear? . . . . Art:C.R.W. Nevinson, Imperial War Museum, London [This message has been edited by Sandpiper (03-12-2003 08:54 PM).] |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
oh, So beautiful. Thank you, I enjoyed this poem so. Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Oh, and the pic helped with a lot.. Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
As Jay Leno said the other night "If these bombs are so smart why are we dropping 3,000 of them?"....As you so aptly noted we haven't learned from previous undeclared wars. Thought provoking. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
agree with RS on this .... and will add my own well done.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandpiper A mute point but you wrote it well. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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