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For Awhile
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For Awhile |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach 
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For Awhile ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Tickle me with your laughter Pamper me with your charms Dazzle me with your manliness Then release me from your arms. Caress me with your words Warm me with your smile Heal me with your sweet kiss Then leave me.... for awhile. ~ Chris Barker ~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nightshade, Lovely, enjoyed the read. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Chris my friend, I LOVE this one! Just fits my mood at the minute. Very well done sweetie! |
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BlueEyes Member
since 2002-08-30
Posts 152TX, USA |
This was great....I absolutely loved it! BlueEyes |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
PHEW! No man could resist these requests!  Fantastic Chris. Huggles, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles in delight) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo adorable, sweet friend, I dream of making my dream girl happy like this and making her feel special and touch her this way! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, your smiles are contagious, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Everyone needs a little "alone time"... but tell him not to stray too far away... because the together time sounds wonderful! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour- I am honoured that you read and commented. Donna - Thankyou - glad it fit the bill! BlueEyes - Thankyou!! Marti - thanks for your comments Naoh - hi sweetie!! Many thanks. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
James & Karilea - thankyou both!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hey Chris!!! Love the write...much enjoyed...very romantic. ~Miss ya, love ya, hugs, Teed~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Nancylee - thankyou sister dear. Miss ya & luv ya too! "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Chris - I love this: Come here now get away - lol - very nice writing xxoo |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
lol. Very beautiful.  Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
littlewing & connel - thankyou both! "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Yes! Absolutely! I love the way you say this, and I love the words you say. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Very romantic read, Chris...beautifully done.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
*sigh* everythings makes me sigh today. But this is a good sigh. I like this Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Nice piece of writing, loved it |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
Very nicely done. Short, but sweet. I'm impressed with your flawless use of meter and rhyme. "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Chris--Close is good, as long as there is breathing room. Loved this! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou all so much !!! "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
lmbo Chris...you have no idea how much it really fits the "bill"....lol.....thanks hon... |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Eat your cake and . . .? Such a tease! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Nightshade - now after all of this, I wouldn't want to leave you for a while, well maybe for a minute, to get you a dozen roses... BC |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Donna - oh really? lol. hugs!! Krawdad - a tease? Me? Never...well..maybe just a wee bit.  Bill - awww, how sweet - thankyou! "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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