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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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{Would you know my heart} If it whispered your name softly the fantasy of pressing lips—gentle touch fingertip traces eyes making love {Would you remember the feeling of velvet} silk skin, lingering – longing –aching~~ I am here come touch my heart & remember Take me where the tides start |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Greeneyes Could anyone recieve a nicer invitation.  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
your words invite indeed...and I am sure no one could forget... very softly sensual.. nicely done. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Lauren, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your gorgeous words do, with your words of velvet they would never cease to make your love remember! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Silky soft in sensuality Lauren... Love this. ~Smiles & Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
ENJOYED  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
A gentle and enjoyable write. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Lauren, This is so lovely. Soft, tender, and subtly sensual. ENjoyed greatly, Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lauren, this is so beautiful.;loveya: Hugs, Ethel |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Two words, lucky bastard.. |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Ahh, nice nice. Loved it! Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Greeneyes - your words are said with enchantment, warm must be your heart. You are a master of romance... BC |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Such a soft touch, as always. Very pretty Lauren~ |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
the wa you use the formatting to control the pace and feel was intersting and new to me. i will have to re-read a couple more times to get the true feel. nice. -majnu |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Yes, I believe I'd know that feeling very well, sweet friend, and have known it at least a few times. This is not only very sensual, but also thought-provoking. Because of your knowing in how to place a pen so perfectly, as you always do, I would truly love to see this in the book, Lauren. Love and hugs to you The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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JAR Junior Member
since 2001-11-06
Posts 34 |
Softly. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
They wouldn't dare forget... beautiful, Lauren...simply beautiful... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Well...I'm gonna have a reread, just because. Lovely, this is |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hey all.... I so appreciate all the beautiful comments, it means so much that you take your time to read....Peace to all.....Love too Muwwwaaahhhsss and HUGSSSSSSSSS Lauren~ Here I am |
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Laurenel Junior Member
since 2003-03-12
Posts 17Georgia, USA |
I loved it, it was beautiful. Keep up the good work. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Greeneyes~ Tender thoughts written so softly. Enjoyed very much...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
had to come back and visit this... it is indeed soft... and such an appealing write. you took very few words to convey so much more than some take volumes to try and say..leaving the reader indeed with an understanding as well as enough room to draw their own life into the piece... I did.. and do enjoy this type of write... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lady L~ you have no idea of how this speaks to me on this day....love it hon....luv you! I must have had my momma's will |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, this calls for a big SIGH... Sandra |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Lauren - this is beautiful - I seriously doubt anyone will forget . . . xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-15-2003 01:17 PM).] |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
An invitation worth taking, I do believe. Silk, skin, eyes making love, what an enjoyable prelude to an even more wonderful time to come. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is just SO sweet and soft, I could have sworn I smelled "downy" while reading! Such a gentle way with words, and yes, I envy that. Hugs, Lauren. |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
"eyes making love" lovely words always ~A~ |
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