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I'll Never Say Forever
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I'll Never Say Forever |
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Gunslinger Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901TX, USA 
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I'll never say forever- I'm learning from the past... "Forever, dear"; and, "always", Just never seem to last. Love is so elusive- Yet passion's all around. I'll never say, "Forever"- It has a phony sound. So often I have listened- To the siren song. Of everlasting happiness, I wonder what went wrong? "I'll always love you, baby". Too soon turned into hate, I learned to fear "forever", But learned it far too late. Some say that I'm a cynic. Some merely call me fool. I guess that I'll admit it, Too oft emotions rule... My swan song is a sad one- Dirge of a poor lost fool, I never say forever, The echo is too cruel. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
This is a fine story of emotions often felt by many. Ken J Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Man, do I EVER know what this is all about... Nicely done ~You might say I'm a Dreamer, but I'm not the only one... |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
this ones a keeper. Good job! Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is a beautiful, sad song. You do these so well! Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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