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jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

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0 posted 2003-03-11 01:12 PM

Anger spurred

The road turned rough;
the man refused
to walk it.
He pushed away
any helping hand
and upon the beast
he leaped.
Horned and ugly
he rode it.
Rage ravaged wanton
destruction;
he held the reigns
but the beast knew
who was the
master.

[This message has been edited by jellybeans (03-11-2003 05:03 PM).]

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-03-11 03:34 PM

Wow...these are really powerful words with a deep lesson within.
Thanks,
Eric

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

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2 posted 2003-03-11 05:25 PM

very deep I really liked this one so I must bring it front to ponder it more

icequeen
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since 2001-12-09

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FL USA

3 posted 2003-03-11 10:53 PM

Love the intensity and depth here. Great job, jellybeans!

the only man worth your tears will never make you cry

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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4 posted 2003-03-12 11:31 AM

This packs a powerful punch, lady... with a trailing of sorrow that so many react to adversity with anger against the innocents instead of battle against the true foe.

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

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5 posted 2003-03-12 11:34 AM

JB, you portrayed anger very well.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

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6 posted 2003-03-12 03:02 PM

thank you all....very much *soft smile*

passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-03-14 04:40 PM

awesome write, lady!

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

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8 posted 2003-03-15 12:15 PM

jellybeans - I love this! amazing writing - just the right punch - xxoo

Rex Allen McCoy
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Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

9 posted 2003-03-15 08:21 AM

this one really speaks

nice writing JB

cinnamongirl
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since 2003-02-02

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10 posted 2003-03-15 08:38 AM

Wow... that is an amazing write. Incredible power- and, oh, what a dramatic, profound ending to an amazingly profound poem! Just... wow. Beyond words.

Thank you!!!
Moca

GG
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since 2002-12-03

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Lost in thought

11 posted 2003-03-15 10:09 AM

I think I know a situation like this.. *shakes her head to get the thought out of there*
this is powerful and 'felt'. I like it alot.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Connel

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since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

12 posted 2003-03-15 10:16 AM

.. Very unigue!

Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part!

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