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Urea's Promis
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TaureauRouge Junior Member
since 2002-06-01
Posts 26A mass of land between two oceans |
"Urea's Promis" The Poet crouched by the crashing rocks and, seeing a few crustaceans began to urinate when this pleasing fire had ceased the Poet hiked his member back to captivity After all, this is not Dover Beach and these stones aren't girls The crustacean clicked her claws clayfully under the sinking brine and the Poet, wondered a while on his art dissipating into the sea the Poet, involved with himself, asked himself himself replying with heavy eyelids and a light mind swaying, the crustacean clicked her claws clayfully vomitous green hair hung off the heads of four naked figures lounged and carolling upon rocks beyond the floating dead A blood red tongue flicked passing ships snacking on six sailors fearing the whirlpool's sips and dips sky's dark womb ached and clouds swelled with birth, a downpour disintegrating the Poet's dreams stirring the phabled Phoenician's schemes tap tap tap. reality on the forehead Salty raindrops flowed into his throat Bounced off his nude chin and dissolved into the sand Back up the beach the Poet went, clicking his claws clayfully --------------------------------------------- I apologize for the vulgar content of this poem, but it's something that happens. "I should have been a pair of ragged claws/ Scuttling over the floors of silent seas"-T.S. Eliot |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Very nice! Vulgar? I thought....not. Good one. ~wranx "The shortest distance between two points is.....sometimes intolerable" |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Vulger? I think not. Quite interesting, this is indeed, but great none the less! Loved it! Tanya ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The tapping of reality is what makes this so intriguing, and the fact that I'm seeing pieces of myself wash up. Exceptional poem to be sure! Welcome TaureauRouge~ |
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