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sparking the gypsy |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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You play the fife-- I'll tap a drum foot-flower bells on my feet keeping time gypsy dance madness kisses of wine watch my hand weave on backdrop of sky spin-art of laughter and patience of saint sand grains of time I use for my paint... I will weep myrrh as this passion burns frankincense gold of sun's joy return. Keep ye the silver-- today I am free. Rest ye now weary as I wash your feet. Allow me the favor to tend to your need-- for something in you sparked mem'ry of me. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
You know, there is something magical in each and every one of your writings. I enjoy them all so much. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- that perches in the soul.... -Emily Dickinson [This message has been edited by Nightshade (03-10-2003 11:10 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, indeed, the spark, the flame, and the bar... raises higher...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, Well you ring my bell.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*mouth falling open* |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
K - Im sitting here waiting for another story - pleeaassseee - this is just music - this line is is utter brilliance: sand grains of time I use for my paint... I adore how you use metaphors so beautifully excellent xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-10-2003 03:03 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I'd bend down on knees and give you an I'm not worthy bow but you know my knees are wonky..you are beyond gifted |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is beautiful and have I ever told you that everytime I read something as beautiful and enchanting as this...you remind me of Stevie Nicks, or is it that she reminds me of you? (ok yo can laugh now) But I am serious. I hope that doesnt offend you gorgeous, it's meant as a compliment. hugs and love Maree. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Raph? My knees are shot too, but? grin...let's not discuss the why's and wherefore's here in Open Forum...  and thank you all...it's just that kinda day today..... mmmmmmyummmies....  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
whooops...hey Luscious... smile...yes, I have been told that before...tho I can't recall who said it. But I have also been called Janis Joplin, and I was only ten years old at the time! you! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now wasn't that smooooooth? Some days you just make me so darn proud I know you, and this might be one of them  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
********************* watch my hand weave on backdrop of sky spin-art of laughter and patience of saint sand grains of time I use for my paint... ********************* BRAVO! you are brilliant! |
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