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Open Poetry #25
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j0n4th4n
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0 posted 2003-03-18 04:23 PM

re-writing it

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j0n4th4n
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1 posted 2003-03-18 04:25 PM

note:

ive only just written this out. its quite rough. im just trying to express some feelings im having round about now.
j0n4th4n
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2 posted 2003-03-18 04:40 PM

oh by 'peace' i mean personal peace, not kind of war/peace (i want that aswel obviously)
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3 posted 2003-03-18 06:33 PM

Yes, Spring is in the air. A delightful read, enjoyed
j0n4th4n
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4 posted 2003-03-19 05:01 PM

ive just re-read this poem and oh dear its terrible!!
ive been trying recently to simplify my style, but i fear ive gone to far with this one. its very difficult to write simply and well, cause what you write is more transparent then.
any chance of being able to delete this post, moderators?
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