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Open Poetry #25

I love you, I hate you

Kellie545
Junior Member

since 2003-02-20

Posts 10

0 posted 2003-03-09 08:47 PM

I don't want to be your star
There's just too many shining tonight
I still want to be there when you close your eyes
You're always there when I close mine
You haunt my dreams, you are my day
Like a child, it kills to look and not touch
You're such a child playing these games
I think I've surfaced these lonely waters
You drag me back down again, just let me be
You know I would do anything for you
But I don't want your love
I don't want your deceiving promises
I just want five minutes of your time
And one last kiss to end my life

~kellie~

All Gardeners Live In Beautiful Places Because They Make Them So
- Joseph Joubert

Amara
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 158
East of the moon, west of the sun.

1 posted 2003-03-09 09:49 PM

Beautiful. All I can say. I love the last line, especially.

Every heart has hidden treasures...a secret wish, a silent dream, and a cherished love. [Unknown]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-03-09 10:25 PM

very beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-03-10 01:58 AM

damn...I know this too well

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-03-10 07:25 AM

Enjoyed...James

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-03-11 03:12 AM

Goodness Kellie - that last line struck it home - very nice xxoo

Silver_Tryst
Member

since 2003-03-10

Posts 64
MT

6 posted 2003-03-11 08:40 PM

Great Write, it was all very catchy and just a mix of emotions

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-03-11 08:42 PM

Mmhmm. Mix of emotions really is confuesing. But still a good poem.

Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part!

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