Open Poetry #25 |
Belly Dancing |
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Hear the tinkling of the coins Swaying from above my loins Giving promise most entrancing As I sway in belly dancing Belly dancing, belly dancing With hypnotic movement Belly dancing, belly dancing Full bodied for improvement See the sparkle - hear the ping Of those cymbals on my ring See the veils that are romancing all your senses - belly dancing Belly dancing, belly dancing With hypnotic movement Belly dancing, belly dancing Full bodied for improvement I have learned ? am in the union With this shimmering communion See the steps that I am prancing Belly dancing, belly dancing Belly dancing, belly dancing With hypnotic movement Belly dancing, belly dancing Full bodied for improvement Hear the bells that jingle soft As your dreams are borne aloft See the write of hist'ry glancing While I shimmy belly dancing Belly dancing, belly dancing With hypnotic movement Belly dancing, belly dancing Full bodied for improvement Feast upon the wobbling trick In bright array for soul food picnic Feel the dearth of hunger lancing Sated, by my belly dancing Belly dancing, belly dancing With hypnotic movement Belly dancing, belly dancing Full bodied for improvement Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Brother, between your fantastic rhyme and hearing all those coins in motion, I would definitely say you got the rhythm down pat that is for sure. This was pretty spectacular Kethry. A rather cool poem read aloud almost a song (is it?) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Mysteria, it's a song without music. Thanks for stopping by. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Belly dancing is an art, indeed, and not for the clumsy, or klutzy, believe me... Good write, Keth! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Hi, Keth, I love it! Rhythmic and hypnotic-like the best belly-dancing. It's something I could never do, as you know, but I admire it. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh I love this Kethry! Also love belly-dancing. ~Smiles & Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay!!! Oh my gosh...I LOVE BELLY DANCING!!! I got to see Shakira do so much of it in concert when I saw her last January, she is very good! (kiss on cheek) If you'd like to read my poem Tarbiah in Reflections, it has all that belly-dancing spirit in it, yay, we all love you so much, I love this! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love the way you move and push your pen to ping~ What a wonderful dance Kethry~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can hear the "ching ching" now |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The world needs more belly dancers...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is a delight, Kethry. *S* From the clinking sounds of bells to the soft sounds of the veils... you've painted a vivid picture. Excellent work! *S* |
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