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Chokolade
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Chokolade |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Warmed chokolade cascading down the front of me My back - between my . . . down my . . . pooling onto the floor upon my lips - you taste I am chokolade [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-09-2003 06:11 PM).] |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
WOO HOOOOO!!! I gotta commit this one to memory, and in my best fake-French Maid accent, repeat it to someone I know! heheheh Good times are comin'!! LOL You ARE in a witty mood today aren't you?  the only man worth your tears will never make you cry |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
My momma said life is like a box of chokolades.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely! Tastefully rich!  ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
sweet! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
can't picture it...too sweet |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ice - yes a very good mood - a good day lol - Ty for reading - sometimes my fingers think for me Raph - life is a box of chokolades ... Enchantress - rich lol - TY Blues TY for reading - didnt think anyone would shadows - heheheh - im in a crazy mood today xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-10-2003 03:45 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
can i change it to warm golden honey pouring down while im rolling naked in the snow , under glowing moonlight, with someone i love |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
James - glad you enjoyed TY Michele Oh My God - I am laughing so hard lol - this was much more "expressive" but I edited it - honey huh? hmmmm - ok your turn to write one TY xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-10-2003 08:30 AM).] |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
mind if I read between the lines!? haha n/m..*in a weird mood* enjoyed tho!  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A very enjoyable feast of chocolate! Love, Margherita |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I remember this one. Oh yes I do. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
C - glad you ENJOYED it lol TY Margherita - TY so much - hehehe xxoo Mike - lol - you saw the unedited one lol thanks guys xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-10-2003 03:19 PM).] |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
This is gloriously conceived, and charmingly written. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Ken xxoo |
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