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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Waters Snow The rhythm of my heart stampedes. Ever when my sails chart breeze. And catch the wind in hail of show. And thatch my ship through waters snow. Elated in esthetic feel The hold of ship and turn of keel Guided by the star above The touch of fire of this love The lay of brine upon my face My stay before the wind in place To ride within the lightening light To brave the thunder of the night To be myself as I can be To sail the sea and master me The execution of a dare Is a feel beyond compare? So here I wile a phantoms weave And fantasize with life’s naïve. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
good morning, i am happy to get first byte.. yes, to be our own master of our own fate, is it harder to survive our life or our death? hmmmm good thoughtd this sunday am. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This is a wonderful read, thanks for sharing  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess Much harder surviving life but that's my poinion, Thank you. Marshalzu My pleasure to share, thank you for reading and replying. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sy, This is wonderful. I especially like and can feel: "The lay of brine upon my face" Enjoyed greatly, Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And if sea-dragons break the wave then let God see that I'll be brave, for if naive is what I be, only my soul shall sail the sea... Hugs on a grand Sunday morning, Sy...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful morning read as always Sy! Now...time for tea? ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Tis almost like a song it is!! Morning Seymour. Wonderful words once again. An assortment of jams to-day!! hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pat , You are a joy,  Sunshine Thank you dear, you are a love. Nancy, Yes time for Sunday tea, Chris, With all the goodies, I think I'm putting on weight, LOL |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Good morning Sy ~~ a beautiful read with my tea this bright and sunny Sunday morn. Hugs to you, Marti |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marti, Happy sunday, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The rhythm of my heart stampedes. Ever when my sails chart breeze. And catch the wind in hail of show. And thatch my ship through waters snow. Elated in esthetic feel The hold of ship and turn of keel Guided by the star above The touch of fire of this love The lay of brine upon my face My stay before the wind in place To ride within the lightening light To brave the thunder of the night ========================================= Well turn those sails my direction and sail upon me mothy sea of serenity--- You-Popeye and me will be your Olive Oil  LOLYou rhymes ROCK and it Rolls me mothy soul, me sweet Sy-guy!!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, It's Hi Hi Ho, and off to sea we go. You bring with thee some raspbery tea And we will sail the waters snow. Perhaps we'll find an Isle of seem And there we'll stay and have a dream. WWRS |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Thanks for the bump. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wonderful poem Seymour! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick Thank you dear. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice last lines, as always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing shadows Always a pleasure to have your comment. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The lay of brine upon my face My stay before the wind in place To ride within the lightening light To brave the thunder of the night I love this, Seymour! *S* I can see you standing bravely, facing whatever comes your way. *S* Of course, this also made me think of the delight of a summer boat ride... where the thunder and lightning came from exploding fireworks. *S* And that's a lovely memory! *S* |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Yeah, As passing shaows said, them last lines were great! For the whole poem, my rate is a : 01!! Or wait. Upside down. Hang on let me flip it right side up... There! 10!  Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern always a pleasure to read you comments, thank you. Connel Big thanks for the 10. |
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