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Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

0 posted 2003-03-09 05:32 PM

From the very beginning I have had this itch
a slight urge a little pinch
way in the back of my soul

I can not reach it
the desire is overwhelming
I must scratch it to fulfill my need

I start to plead as the tiny feeling begins to grow
sometimes a tickle other times a tingle
either way a thirst begins

A liking to this itch
a strong regard from a weak spot
in my heart that is how it always seems to start

Romance is building from a little everyday friendship fling
until it is unyielding and starts to sing

This is a passionate sting that I feel
as I read the words from your lips
that you also have this itch

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

1 posted 2003-03-09 06:22 PM

I think this quite creative.
Smiling here...
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-03-09 07:01 PM

Everyone has an ich for something,. My itch is to succeed in life, and be a wealthy, and happy man with a family.

Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-03-10 12:14 PM

(smiles) Oh Thomas, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your beautiful words do! (big hugggssssss) We all have these itchings and sometimes you just shouldn't scratch it, just let the afterglow burn on, yay, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Thomas, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-03-10 01:45 AM

very good! love the ending!

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

5 posted 2003-03-10 08:36 AM

Thank you

sorry still can't seem to scratch that one spot

Ladies_Rogue
New Member

since 2003-03-06

Posts 7
Mississippi

6 posted 2003-03-10 02:24 PM

Tom,
you sure someone didn't slip you some itching powder?

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2003-03-10 03:21 PM

Thomas - I'm scratchin . . . hehehe very nice - can relate much xxoo

sea_of_okc
Senior Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 568
Oklahoma City, OK, USA

8 posted 2003-03-10 04:32 PM

You sure you didn't sit in some poison ivy?

Nice write.

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

9 posted 2003-03-20 08:56 PM

Yep, I know exactly what you are talking about.

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

10 posted 2003-03-21 02:37 PM

LOL
the response and humor yall are bad

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