Open Poetry #25 |
Hollowed Reed |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
And I am As a hollowed reed Swayed by life's most passionate Winds - emptiness mourned As solitary sound. And yet I am As a hollowed reed Played holy by the whispered Breath of God - a singular instrument Within a symphony of sound. I am A Hollowed Reed. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
To the Library with you young man! I'll teach you to write a !!!! |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Amazing imagery... I can hear the music of this hollowed reed, and I do heed the message in its sacred song. You are a Divine musician, playing perfectly a masterpiece of pure Love and Light. This is such an incredible poem... thank you for the Light of your words. You are truly a phenomenal Messenger. You listen so very well... Love, Moca |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful! I love writings by you! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
your poetry is touching...h |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ericc - this is lovely - painstakingly beautiful xxoo |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Whenever I hear a poet use the word hollow in their verse before, it always seems to be used in a depressing and haunting context, but I truly believe there is a belssing in being hollow, so the music can curse through you, for if there's no hole in the wood, then nothing can get in and how do you know a spirit ever got in? (big hugggssssss) I love this, sweet friend, let your flute of the heart bellow to the wind, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! May love and light alwyas shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Simply perfect. Absolutely divine. the only man worth your tears will never make you cry |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You have me listening in awe to the Breath of God. A caress for the soul. Love, Margherita |
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